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are you here just to trick me or treat me?
im holding my bag open waiting for you to drop atleast one thing in.
ive already got a variety but im missing that one brand.
longing for its taste and i need it in my system.
i walk around the streets in horror.
im lost and i cant seem to find my way home.
your door is welcoming.
im holding my bag open waiting for you to drop atleast one thing in.
©2006-2009 ~Only-Of-You
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this is probably categorized all wrong.

this isnt about what you think. but i made it so you would believe it was about something else when it really isnt. kinda metaphoric? just right for halloween. i dont know if it has two meanings when you read it but when i did i noticed it did.

tell me what you think

took me like 6 minutes to write so its not very good

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:iconcritical-condition:
Hm, 6 minutes....I'd love to see what u could do in an hour.

Its really well written, the metaphor really works well ;-) sweet!

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
:icononly-of-you:
in a hour i seem to acomplish nothing. actually most my writing is no longer than 20 or 30 minutes. my thoughts only stay with me for a short time. its weird i wish it was different, but im flattered thank you.

:D

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chyeaitschelsea
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:iconcritical-condition:
;-) I know the feeling, it just doesnt work when you have time!

:flowerpot:

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
:iconkilroyart:
very nicely written :) yes it can be percieved as more than one meaning :D

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:blackrose: Feel My Heart...Feel My Pain.
....Feel My Tears...Feel My Falling Rain...Feel My Pain :blackrose:
:iconkilroyart:
very nicely written :) yes it can be percieved as more than one meaning :D

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:blackrose: Feel My Heart...Feel My Pain.
....Feel My Tears...Feel My Falling Rain...Feel My Pain :blackrose:
:icononly-of-you:
thank you sooo much!

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chyeaitschelsea
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:iconkilroyart:
oh you're so very welcome :D

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:blackrose: Feel My Heart...Feel My Pain.
....Feel My Tears...Feel My Falling Rain...Feel My Pain :blackrose:

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